Leaves me blank,
When I think
You’ll depart
Difficult to identify with
The ache of this dispirited heart.
However I refuse
To have to do
Without ‘Those Eyes’
I know,
I have to.
It sure is hard
For me and for you
But in the end
I’m sure
Promises will come true.
I promise you
For you I’ll be waiting
Be it, then,
Years ..
Five or Fifteen!
Being yours
Is all I want
The distance isn’t
At all
Gonna make it gone.
The simple idea of
Getting to spend my life with you
Has me smiling
A smile…
That I want to continue.
Thinking of the day you’ll leave
Makes me numb
But to this gloom,
I promise,
I won’t succumb.
All I want is you
To flourish and thrive
About this love
Leave it to me
It will sure survive!
It’s impossible to fathom
The love you show
The bliss I feel
In your arms
In all the moments I steal.
‘Time’ will advance
But I will remain,
Giving ‘time’ no opening
To make ‘TRUTH’ refrain
From ‘Winning’.
The very ‘Truth’
that promises me
To take me
to a place
I’m so longing to be….
A mountain, A small house
A glut of trees
And Me…
On my knees…
Smiling…
Offering you a ring
Nervous ….
Thinking which song to sing...
17 comments:
AWESOMEEE....
Oh My God! I need a tissue ... :'(
-Neer
kiti goad !! :)
kiti goad :) truth promises all this but :)
that was really gud..... u write so wel..fantabulous!!!
straight from d heart!!!
@pranay: thanks !! :)
@Neer: what do i say.. Calm down.. :P
@the killing joke ie Satyajit: even i m sure that trUth promises me all this.. :) (all the best ;P)
@ Janhavi: Thanks... :D
you know what..finally truth alone triumphs!!!!!!
@Ameya P.: So true !! :) thanks !!
Don't tell me you wrote it....is it??...Very nice!
wow..!! tht was great..!!
dunno wat to say.. i cud see every single moment i spent, til see off.. tht was rily touching..!!
@ Sagar:
Thanks.. yes.. i've written it.. :) initially, i thot it has turned out to be childish.. but all these comments have successfully changed that thinking of mine.. :) thanks again!
@ Sampada:
I understand.. :)And Thanks dear.
Mind blowing, spellbound, those are the words of a true expert!!!
hats off
@Ameya K: expert wagere kahi nahi re.. ugich apla.. watla mhanun lihilay.. :) thanks !!
awesome!dint kno u wer so good at this riting stuff !!!!
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